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Ianna A. Small

Short Story Developmental Edit

$395.00

For writers ready to do the real work of revision.

You have a finished draft. This edit helps you make it the story it is trying to be.

The Short Story Developmental Edit offers a close reading of a single short story (up to 5,000 words). You will gain insight into structure, character development, pacing, and the choices that give your story impact.

You'll receive an honest, thoughtful reading of your work. It will highlight your story’s potential, show you where the narrative opens up, and offer clear guidance to help you develop your next draft with intention.

You will receive:

  • A comprehensive developmental edit presented in a 3-4 page editorial letter
  • A Craft Pattern Note identifying emerging patterns in your writing
  • Margin notes in places where clarity or refinement will support your revision

Delivered 4-6 weeks from receipt of your manuscript.

Note: Refunds are not offered after your manuscript is submitted for review.

The goal is not to rewrite your story. The goal is to show you what is working and what to expand.

Once you register, you will receive an email with instructions on how to email over your story for evaluation and to initiate our process.

Your critique will be delivered 4-6 weeks from the receipt of your manuscript, to allow sufficient time to review and provide meaningful feedback.

For Classes: We offer full refunds for cancellation with written notice up until 7 days before your class start date. From 6 days to more than 24 hours before class begins, we offer a 25% refund. If you drop a class less than 24 hours before the class begins or after it has started, you are ineligible for a refund.

The Write-In Bundle is non-refundable once purchased. If you are unable to attend a session, your spot is held and you are welcome to attend any remaining sessions in the bundle period.

By signing up for a class, you agree to our refund policy and code of conduct here.

For Editing packages: Refunds are not offered after your story or manuscript is submitted for review.

Meet Your Instructor

Ianna A. Small

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Ianna A. Small is a seasoned editor and story coach with over 12 years of experience helping writers bring their ideas to the page with clarity, confidence, and craft.

As the executive editor behind midnight & indigo, she’s worked closely with more than 400 emerging and established Black writers across the diaspora, guiding short stories, essays, and novel excerpts from rough draft to published piece.

She leads all editorial direction for the magazine and Writing Program, with a sharp eye for narrative structure, character development, and emotional resonance.